Looks reasonable to me. No list is going to be perfect for you on your first trip--because you'll have to learn what works for you and what doesn't.

I am a bit confused by your clothing. Seems that you are prepared for cold, but what will you wear if it is 75-90 degrees and you need to hike in that weather?

I'd take zip off pants instead of the track pants, so that I could wear them as shorts if needed.