Wow, that's a lot of money and work. I hope it isn't too wide to fit the ALICE pack over the top. Did you weld the connections? If it was me, I would ditch the loops that hold the kidney pad. They aren't needed. I would also make it taller and thinner, but I think you said that was your original intent. Good luck and tell us how it performs.
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